Early Writings Tag: Really Awful Stories I Wrote When I Was Younger

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Some people are lucky and decided to start writing in their late twenties or teens. I am not one of those people.

I have a terrifying stash of stories I wrote when I was in middle school. And really, they are TERRIFYING. But Abbiee started this super-cute tag in which we all share our weirdest stories from when we were younger and I thought, hey. Why not? Because failing is just another version of . . . not failing. Right?

*scratches head*

So, welcome to . . .

– The Early Writings Tag –

Looks like it’s a retelling of Cinderella. In fact, I included this super accurate time marker: “The year is 1612. Columbus hasn’t even discovered America yet!”

Note to ten-year-old Amanda: Columbus discovered American in 1492. 

Also, the fairy godmother is pretty much a drug dealer. She calls the main character “dawg” and keeps saying “yo” really randomly. She also can’t pronounce her r’s correctly and randomly eats stuff THAT ISN’T HERS. Actually, this is a really funny character. I had something here.

There is also a guy who is two feet taller than the girl.

???

AND HIS NAME IS CUSTARD. And then I turned the book into a choose your own adventure and ended it right there. Too much work.

What I learned from this book

  • I cannot write choose your own adventures. THEY ARE SO TRICKY.
  • Do not name your character Custard.
  • Funny rapper fairy godmother?? Yes!!
  • Christopher Columbus discovered America in 1492.
  • When in doubt, employ Lip Pout #6 along with blowing a bubble and explaining how tomboyish you are
  • The prince will tell every girl he meets she’s the love of his life
  • #NoGoodSpoiledBrat

Okay so the beginning was super cute. There’s this town called Last Laugh, PA, and a magical tree stands at the center.

BUT THEN IT GOT WEIRD.

There’s this magical green leaf that made everyone feel alive (dudeeeeeee epic leaf) but then it dies and all these brown leaves attack the main character when she walks by the tree. They have little spiky teeth and hold onto her hoodie.

Also . . .

  • The girl’s name is Susan but everyone calls her Dreamy because she’s a spazz
  • She has two twin sisters that always sneeze at the same time (#StereotypicalTwins)
  • Susan wanted to start a handkerchief business when she grew up
  • BUT
  • She’s going to die because she has heart problems and needs a heart transplant
  • SO
  • Susan makes a list of everything she wants to do before she dies

WAHT IS THIS.

There’s this girl named Anne. ;)

She was an orphan but then her grandfather sends for her and she goes on a boat and hardly talks to this dude while on there but he’s really sweet and she’s like dude will you adopt me and I was too lazy to explain how it happened but in a year her grandfather gave her over to this random stranger dude (but it’s okay because the grandfather dies anyway).

Also, Anne has a really cool sailor’s hat. <3

I actually really like this one . . .

There’s this girl named Daisella and once a week a dragon comes and gives her a list of tasks she must do before midnight. There’s also

  • A maid wishing on a dandelion for a guy to like her (typical)
  • Dirty moats
  • The dragon is referred to as a typical guy but what in the world he’s not a guy HE’S A DRAGON WHAT IS A TYPICAL GUY DRAGON WAHT
  • Complaining about having to do random tasks
  • Baking a cake without using milk

There’s this terrifying nursing home and a girl named Kate is the only one that thinks it’s suspicious and she like sneaks around everywhere and finds a computer and logs onto it with a password written on a post-it notes (like who does that tho?).

Also, the secretary’s name is Zelda and she’s wearing Crocs. If that ain’t suspicious, then I don’t know what is. LOCK HER AWAY AND THROW AWAY THE KEY.

And then the people in her contacts for email all have email addresses like RedBandanaBandit@gmail.com. Um, fishy much??

ALSO, Kate has a lead and she wants to meet at Chick-Fil-A like yes. Talking about mysteries over a number one combo, yes please!!

-Funny Things I Noticed-

Favorite names: Kate, Samantha, Anne, Emily

Favorite plots: Orphans, mysteries, princesses

Also: All the guys are hopelessly in love with the beautiful main character and she’s all like dude go away even though he’s adorable

And: Lots of death and crying and heart attacks

So, has my writing gotten better after years of writing embarrassing junk? NOT REALLY. BUT THAT’S OKAY. Because one day I’ll magically be an amazing writer.

Pardon me while I go chat with my gangsta grandmother, get random tasks from a talking dragon, and get attacked by evil brown leaves.

So, will you be a part of the early writings tag? Be brave!!

  • Abbie Emmons

    AMANDA I’M SO HAPPY YOU DID THIS TAG AND CAN I JUST SAY…..I WAS LAUGHING MY HEAD OFF THROUGH THIS WHOLE THING xD seriously I love your hilarious brutally honest way of writing!! HAHAHA IT’S AWESOME. The Christopher Columbus thing oh my gosh… :””’) THAT IS BEAUTIFUL. I basically want to read all of these stories asap <3333 THANK YOU FOR DOING THIS TAG IT WAS SO GREAT!

    • YAYYYYYYY thanks so much for making it up! In the past I’ve wanted a way to share my old stories but I couldn’t think of an interesting way to do it. Ahhhhh that was quite embarrassing but funny lol. Honestly don’t know what I was thinking there. <3

  • Sofia Race

    Goodness, I laughed so much. The Cinderellas story sounds like so much fun, lol :) And Columbus, oh my. And I loved how random the adopting dude is. And, of course, since her grandpa dies, all is good. And a typical dragon dude!

    Thanks for sharing!

    https://teensliveforjesus.blogspot.com

    • Yay, so glad you liked it! ;) Yeah, I actually had a tiny bit of something that may possibly be worth reading there lol! I guess all of my stories were just . . . typical. Ack!! Hope I’ve grown out of that by now. ;)

  • Oh my gosh I laughed so hard while reading parts of this. COLUMBUS HASN’T EVEN DISCOVERED AMERICA YET. XD
    Thanks so much for sharing!

    You can find my version of this tag here:
    https://mixedmargins.com/2017/07/6-stories-i-wrote-as-a-kid-early-writings-tag/

    • Aw you’re so welcome! I was so embarrassed to share that but it’s okay haha. I knew it would provide a laugh, and I know now. ;) I loved your version, thanks for sharing!!

  • Zane Jones

    Okay yes I need to do this tag because IT’S HILARIOUS AND MY EARLY WRITINGS STINK. So…I’ll add it to my mental tags-to-do list. ;)

    • Yes!! Please do it and share the link when you’re done. I’d LOVE to read it! <3

    • Oh and consider yourself tagged lol!